New Short Story - "Another Brick in the Wall"

http://www.slapastory.com/short/Another_Brick_in_the_Wall

Please check out my latest short story, "Another Brick in the Wall", on slapastory.com. It is a short story competition, so if you like the story, I'd appreciate a vote. In any event, I'd really like to hear what you have to say, good or bad. I am still new to the short story form, so I am gratefull for all input.

Thanks and enjoy!