Hi Leigha, Congratulations! I love the music on your trailer and the idea. Just a suggestion on the writing- I found the letting too light and a bit quick which made it hard to read.
If you'd like to read my newspaper column on the Expat page of an English newspaper published in Turkey. Just copy and paste. http://www.todayszaman.com/tz-web/yazarDetay.do?haberno=121542 Enjoy!
Comment by Marion James on September 9, 2007 at 6:08am
Hi leigha
I loved the idea of a book trailer and the music is WONDERFUL: so evocative and sensitive. Just a bit of creative criticism on the words on the screen in the first video. The font is a bit hard to read, and the lettering is often in the same colour or a similar colour to the picture behind it. A more contrasting colour font would be better, possibly with the letters being in a bolder font.
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