I just came across your page as I was going through the other members of the group Book Reviewers Wanted.
I noticed that you enjoy reading James Patterson. I loved the Maximum Ride series and Patterson's style of fast pace with short chapters. So, when I started writing my book, Blood and Fire: The Vampire/Dragon Wars, I thought-Hey, I wonder how that style of storytelling would work in a fantasy/horror cross genre?
Well, if you are interested in finding out, please click on my avatar to go to my page. In the content section you will see Blood%20and%20Fire. Double click on that to view the word doc.
Currently, I have only half of my novel available for viewing on this site. My girlfriend is my editor and the word doc is only a rough draft. Some of her notes are interspersed throughout the text and some of the revisions are included paragraph for paragraph with the originals and alternates. She did color code so it is easy to follow.