Fernando, thanks for reaching out! I will be more than happy to check out your book trailer for "The Evil Visitor."

Thanks and best wishes!

Author David Brown

www.ParkwayPress.com

Hi Fernando,

I would be happy to read your prologue and first two chapters of your novel, but I am in the final stages of editing my new book and am swamped with work. Can you please touch base with me in about two weeks? Thanks so much.  Martine

Hi Fernando

Thank you for the friendship connection. Good luck with the sales of your book.

Doug Simpson

Thanks for friending me.  Much success with your book.

Laura Rodriguez

Thanks for the friend request. Good luck with your novel. It sounds very interesting.

I checked out your book and trailor, it sounds very interesting and a little scary, do you believe in God and Jesus, just curious?

Thank you Fernando.

Let me know when your book is in stores and I will have to read it. I hope you have lots of success with your book. Best wishes

Good luck with your book Fernando.

Hope you have great success with your book. An interesting concept and very well written.

All the best,

David

YOU HAVE A BIG HIT,ALL THE BEST WITH YOUR BOOK,GOD BLESS.I AM TRYING WITH MY BOOK TOO,ITS CALLED DROP -OUT,ITS ON THE AMAZON .COM.MICHAEL J ROBINSON.

Best of luck with 'The Evil Visitor.'  I've not visited Maracaibo but I have been to LaGuiara (sp) in 1991. Great billfish fishing!

Thanks. I'll pop over there.

Thanks, I'll be sure to check it out...good luck.  If you're interested, I'm having a giveaway for my paranormal mystery, Sullivan's Secret, on Goodreads.  The last day to enter is Dec 7th.  You can enter through my site: www.robinmurphyauthor.com

Good being a friend here with you!

Amazing marketing.

I will definitely check it out. Thanks!

Thanks Fernando!  Feel free to stop by and see mine at www.foundingmoms.com/book.

Fernando, lots of excitement in your sample chapters. I suspect the rest of the book is too!

I loved the trailer...all I can say is "Increible o Fabuloso!"

Fernando, your sample chapters were fantastic! Congratulations, can't wait to see you on the bestseller list.

Love your book trailer! Let's connect on twitter. @WodkeHawkinson

Fernando, you've built king-sized excitement into your promotional materials. What I read was good, and I'm sure will be well-received for readers of that genre. Your website is a work of art. Thanks for the preview!

Natalie M. Rotunda

HI FERNANDO...AS AN EDITOR,I SCREENED YOUR FIRST PAGES. COULD YOU EMAIL ME PLEASE?

DDEROSE@HVC.RR.COM

THANK YOU....DENNIS @ MONEYSAVER EDITING

Hi Fernado, thanks for the invitation, but your blog is on a black background which kills my eyes. Please consider putting your written material on a light background with black letters. Many of us don't have great eyesight to begin with and you'd probably get more readers that way.

Susan

Fernando, buena suerte con tu libro.

Por razones de falta de tiempo y posibles conflictos (soy "reviewer" para Bookpleasures.com), no puedo leer ni comentar sobre tus capitulos de muestra.  Con tantos amigos aqui, creo que estes en buenas manos.  He leido unos comentarios y me parecen utiles.

Hay otros "websites" donde puedes consequir un juzgado de tus palabras escritas.  Por ejemplo, he publicado un cuento corto en la e-revista "eFiction" y se que hay un grupo ahi que permite esta actividad.

De nuevo, buena suerte.

r/Steve Moore

Fernando, I'll take you up on your offer.  I have a lot to learn from you.

If you have the time, visit my blogazine or my sci fi and fantasy novel, THE GODS

OF THE GIFT, which can be found easily enogh (godsofthegift etc.

Art

Wonderful trailer for the book, Fernando and I enjoyed the sample. Wish you well with your work.

William

Hello Fernando,

Thank-you for your comment.  Are you looking for a formal publisher?  Or simply a review of your prologue?

Cheers

Justin James

CEO/Publisher

Dare Empire

Hi Fernando,

I enjoyed your trailer and reading the prologue and first few pages of the book.  Congratulations! I think the trailer is stunning.  The prologue and first few pages were chilling and draw the reader in.  I think the characters are well developed and the reader should be able to relate to them. All in all, it looks like  agreat read.  Good luck!

I read your summary, prologue and part of the first chapter. While I really like your concept--sounds like a great idea for a thriller--the quality of the translation bothered me. For an American reader, the phrasing is awkward, and even the formatting of the dialog is non-standard. It was hard to get past that to get immersed in the story. I encourage you to get a native English speaker to make another editing pass.

OK Fernando...will do...rt now...

Hey Fernando

Congratulations on the publication of The Evil Visitor!

Doug

Fernando, thanks for posting a comment.  Your site looks awesome.  As soon as I clear my Critique client list I will read your prologue.

Books for KidsManuscript Critiques

Best of luck with your book.

Love the trailer !

Mark Connolly

http://markc.weebly.com

Fernando,

I'll check it out.  In the meantime you might like Noir Nation, a journal of crime fiction I edit.  We're always looking for stories and we pay.

Alan

http://www.amazon.com/Noir-Nation-International-Journal-ebook/dp/B0...

Thank you, Fernando. I am currently working on a book trailer for the third novel I will be releasing this year, Mountain Meadows Aftermath.

Your book sounds interesting! Keep it up!

Fernando hi. Saw ur book trailer and liked it. Thought I had to do something like that for my book. Do check it out...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mx1Utp_zGV4

Fernando hi. Saw ur book trailer and liked it. Thought I had to do something like that for my book. Do check it out...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mx1Utp_zGV4

Thank you Fernando for the message, but your link does not open. 

Hello Fernando, it is compelling moving story. Thanks