Fernando Sobenes's Comments

Check out my blogs. Let me know what you think. I am new to this. How do you get friends? Haha

Hi Fernando,

I appreciate the link you sent and will read it and respond after I do.

Hi Fernando,

I am just now seeing your request to read  part of your novel.  I am so sorry.  My hubby had major surgery in December and have not had time to check out my messages.

Nicole Weaver

Hello Fernando, it is compelling moving story. Thanks

Thank you Fernando for the message, but your link does not open. 

Fernando hi. Saw ur book trailer and liked it. Thought I had to do something like that for my book. Do check it out...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mx1Utp_zGV4

Fernando hi. Saw ur book trailer and liked it. Thought I had to do something like that for my book. Do check it out...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mx1Utp_zGV4

Your book sounds interesting! Keep it up!

Thank you, Fernando. I am currently working on a book trailer for the third novel I will be releasing this year, Mountain Meadows Aftermath.

Fernando,

I'll check it out.  In the meantime you might like Noir Nation, a journal of crime fiction I edit.  We're always looking for stories and we pay.

Alan

http://www.amazon.com/Noir-Nation-International-Journal-ebook/dp/B005JTMIPW/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1326437075&sr=1-1

Best of luck with your book.

Love the trailer !

Mark Connolly

http://markc.weebly.com

Fernando, thanks for posting a comment.  Your site looks awesome.  As soon as I clear my Critique client list I will read your prologue.

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Hey Fernando

Congratulations on the publication of The Evil Visitor!

Doug

OK Fernando...will do...rt now...

I read your summary, prologue and part of the first chapter. While I really like your concept--sounds like a great idea for a thriller--the quality of the translation bothered me. For an American reader, the phrasing is awkward, and even the formatting of the dialog is non-standard. It was hard to get past that to get immersed in the story. I encourage you to get a native English speaker to make another editing pass.

Hi Fernando,

I enjoyed your trailer and reading the prologue and first few pages of the book.  Congratulations! I think the trailer is stunning.  The prologue and first few pages were chilling and draw the reader in.  I think the characters are well developed and the reader should be able to relate to them. All in all, it looks like  agreat read.  Good luck!

Hello Fernando,

Thank-you for your comment.  Are you looking for a formal publisher?  Or simply a review of your prologue?

Cheers

Justin James

CEO/Publisher

Dare Empire

Wonderful trailer for the book, Fernando and I enjoyed the sample. Wish you well with your work.

William